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TERM 1 AND 2! On Wednesdays I work with Jodie. First up Jodie would draw a plan and then we would go off and draw our own plan. Jodie is a great help but sometimes she gets us to do it ourselves. After we have finished that we will surround the table and Jodie will start to write the first paragraph in her story and she asks us for ideas there’s always a great story from Jodie and some of the stories that we make up are brilliant. I choose to be in Jodie’s group because she gives you a lot of help I think it’s great! These are some pieces of writing I have done in Jodie’s class and outside of Jodie’s class.

This is Miss S’s plan man!

Here is my portal story!



This is my Andy story!



This is my formal letter to Rexona deodorants!



This is my informal letter ANZAC letter!



This is what my plan looks like...!

PLANING! This year i have learnt new ways to write my plan These are the main steps


 * Introduction: is where we write the start of the story such as introducing your characters and things like that


 * Middle we have three paragraphs


 * in the first paragraph the problem would start
 * in the second paragraph the problem will go on
 * in the third paragraph the characters will start to fix the problem

is where you come to a solution to the problem and come to and end of your story
 * Conclusion